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English Lesson 01.03.21 - Part 1

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English Lesson 01.03.21 - Part 2

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How could this diary entry be improved?

A Good Example

Suggested Paragraph Plan

Paragraph 1 – Where were you and what could you see?

Paragraph 2 – What could you hear and how were you feeling?

Paragraph 3 – What did you think and what happened?

Paragraph 4 – Conclusion of the day.


Try to include;

- 'Dear diary' and 'From'
- First person (I, me, my)
- Past tense

- Full stops
- Capital letters

- Adjectives


Even better if...

- Fronted adverbials with commas

- Pronouns