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English Lesson 01.03.21 - Part 1
English Lesson 01.03.21 - Part 2
How could this diary entry be improved?
A Good Example
Suggested Paragraph Plan
Paragraph 1 – Where were you and what could you see?
Paragraph 2 – What could you hear and how were you feeling?
Paragraph 3 – What did you think and what happened?
Paragraph 4 – Conclusion of the day.
Try to include;
- 'Dear diary' and 'From'
- First person (I, me, my)
- Past tense
- Full stops
- Capital letters
- Adjectives
Even better if...
- Fronted adverbials with commas
- Pronouns